Here is the feedback from my instructor:
the first part of your paper, but I stopped before I got to the part where you begin your analysis. The problem so far is that you get key facts of the case study very wrong (and thus it didn\’t make sense for me to read the analysis part if you plan to fix your understanding of the case study). after you fix the first part, check your case analysis.
Also he added some comments in the word docs in blue.
find attached the case study, instructors and my paper